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Saved April 1, 2012
Final Review Completed 4/01/2012 by Di 
 
I edited out some repetitive words and phrases, corrected some punctuation, mainly sentence structure with periods vs. semicolons. 
 
Jacque Fresco - What the Future Holds beyond 2000 - Proofreading Notes
 
18:53.281 - 18:56.967 - Edison purchased it, put a magnifying glass in front of it. - It does sound like he's saying this but 'purchased it' doesn't seem to make sense to me. I can't make out what he's saying... Sounds like 'purchased to me too. I left it as is.  
18:57.107 - 19:01.233 - You put a nickel in, you turn the crank and you saw people moving;
19:01.373 - 19:03.739 - a bunch of still photographs.
 
34:25.400 - 34:29.120 - Well let me say this again. The typewriters that work to speech. - Don't know if this is what he's saying (it sounds like it) but I don't get it... 
34:29.260 - 34:32.103 - Today you talk to your computer and you get a type
34:29.260 - 34:32.103 - Today you talk to your computer and you get it typed - this seems better to me... 
34:32.243 - 34:35.765 - and also corrects your English, restructures your sentences
34:35.905 - 34:38.168 - makes recommendations.